Sunday, 6 April 2014
JANUARY-MARCH 2014: WEEK 9 & 10. END OF TERM REVIEW (PART2)
The moment I saw you drawing Godzilla, I wanted to meddle. I held back to see what you would do.
At the risk of being over medling I have taken the liberty of giving you some pointers that I hope will improve your drawing and future work.
So, here is where you were at at the end of class.
Below, I have redifined the solids in red. I totally see what you were doing in creating stark contrasting lighting from the flames but it was looking a bit flat and if you remember what I was saying in class about imagining the shapes and curves of you subject and how light would fall on the curves, it might be a bit more like this.
here is the revised black version.
Godzilla has a massive tail and I felt that a longer tail would balance the figure better.
Finally, I revised the position of the arms. By doing this I have allowed for more of Godzilla's fins to be more prominent, which will also create a more identifiable shape.
I hope this helps. Let me know what you think.